April 16 Texas Spring Too
April 16 Texas Spring TooSometimes in the morning the wind and clouds here smell like Key West. I swear I saw Captain Tony pushing a full shopping cart down the sidewalk, the Texas Capitol casting a...
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A heartfelt meander with so many great images/feelings. Love the connections to Michigan, which may be subtle for others. The bar, the pick Barbie kite, the garden . . . nicely woven together. This is...
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Good, good, good: Dave's Dam Bar with blues and bikers, and men in blue suits is another world, another excuse. This, too: Somewhere out there, along a Michigan back road, my father drives his old...
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Sometimes in the morning the wind and clouds here smell like Key West. I can smell it! i love the feeling of Captain Tony... full-bellied jackrabbits. . . nice! you're on a roll.
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Full bellied Jack rabbits jump sideways in the staccato streetlight glow.staccato glow - nice oxymoron.
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Love the N and also want to but the little girl 3 kites. So sweet. Cool how you have N on belly in yard then use full-bellied jackrabbits after. Too in the title is quite clever.
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Loved the whole trip, Kendall. One of my favorite images, The sun is a fresh red tomato. I wonder if that came to you as you were writing the poem or if you were keeping it in reserve.
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Wow. This is good! I spent a little time in the keys and its amazing to me how many "captains" there are there - more captains that ships, I think. For me, it was Captain Jack. I love the ending on...
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